Friday, March 13, 2009

Revenge

Revenge is black
black for the secrecy used in it
Revenge sounds like silence
silence for the soundless murder
Revenge tastes like blood
blood after the knife slides between ribs
Revenge smells like fear
fear of the coming danger
Revenge feels like sorrow
sorrow for the betrayal it shows
Revenge is of anger
anger to be aimed






Anger

Anger is red
red for the burning
Anger sounds like blaring
blaring from the release
Anger tastes like pastry
pastry for the joy of it
Anger smells like fire
fire burning you inside-out
Anger feels like strength
strength of the wielder

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

It's good to want revenge and anger. they feel really good. What does peace feel like?

Nick B.

Anonymous said...

I would have to agree with everything you said about anger! Red, fire, yes! Great comparisons! The pastry thing I'm not so sure, but good job!

-Kesha :)

Anonymous said...

revenge sounds bed I'll never take revenge because you'll pay for what you've done