Friday, March 13, 2009

Peace
By Adam

Peace is green,
It sounds like a smooth flowing river,
It tastes like the greatest ice cream ever made,
It smells like an open field,
Peace feels like lying on the grass, looking up at the stars.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This sounds amazing. Peace can be so many different things, but it feels like we can never reach other poing of having peace between everyone. It seems like someone always has a problem with someone else.

~Rachel~

Anonymous said...

Holly cow! I love ice cream! ice cream is a great thing to compare peace to!

-Kesha :)

Anonymous said...

I like that its cool that you can make a poem about ur favorite color

TY

Anonymous said...

this sounds pretty good i like this poem