What is life like?
Life in a desert was sandy
Life in caves was lonely
Life in ocean was salty
Life in stars was resplendent
Life in the car was modern
Life in the mountains was exhilarating
Life in sun was brilliant
Life in your life is my life
This poem is one of many about life, I like this poem because is mine. I think has a good message. It trying to say the life is in everywhere. We have to take care about our environment like we take care of ourselves.
Carlos
3 comments:
I think you have the what it is like to live in different places.
Anthony
I like how you explain life. It was a nice poem.
Dani
I agree, life is all around us, everywhere we look. And I also agree that we need to take better care of our earth, because this is the only one we get... our only chance.
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