Love is a thinking pain.
Every time she comes around I feel the pain.
She is a problem worth thinking to solve.
I can’t help but to put my mind to it.
Love is all she makes me think about.
She came into my life and loved me.
Then her and me created the most wonderful
Thing in the world. That wonderful thing is little Jayvid Marcus Roberts. Then she made a mistake and we cannot be together. I know now that we were not to be together.
Tanner
5 comments:
I think you should put a little more rhyme in there.. i did like it though good job.
Nick P (1)
That sounds like a crappy deal. People want what they can't always have.. It sounds like that is what you are going through. I hope everything works out.
Kelsee
nice you did a nice job and love not always is sweet
If it's the correct relationship for you and her, it'll work out.
Anthony
I have to say it's an okay start, you could have put a little more rhyme in it, but thats just my opinion.-Noble
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