Love is like a red passion in our hearts It sounds like thunder in the storm It taste like water when you’re in the desert It smells like expensive perfume Love feels like a pillow in your arms!
Carlos
4 comments:
Anonymous
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I really like this one because it is so short yet it seems like it tells a long story. Great job.
4 comments:
I really like this one because it is so short yet it seems like it tells a long story. Great job.
Nick P (1)
I like how you compared it to water in the desert. It makes it sound like a need. I like that a lot.
-shalee l.
I really liked your poem. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. Its really happy and joyful.
Karissa
I like this poem. You did a great job.
Dani
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