Haikus
Wind whispers again
The name I loved long ago
Calling me to her
To be hers again
To keep the love I loved
I hold her again
The woman I loved
We will be meeting again
In the place we met
I need to go back
To the place I loved once ever
There she waits for me
I went to the sea
And yearned to be mine again
To be on my ship
This ship will never sink
It lies where none can touch it
It is the mountains
Anthony
4 comments:
I like how the poems stood on their own but blended well into each other. Keep writing about what matters.
Nick B.
that makes a little bit of sense but not a whole lot. I can see how it would make sense but it doesn't so i don't understand it except one that was about love.
Tayler
i really like these because of the emotion in them. I do think you should switch it up a little bit, to me it sounded like they were both talking about the same thing. but keep it up! Nick P (1)
i really like this poem its a good creative poem
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