Friday, April 10, 2009

Narrative Introduction

“Yes I’ll go to your house after school” I said this to my best friend in 2006 we used to talk a lot about his family and my problems but he never told me about his cousin Yadira. The first time when I saw her I didn’t fall in love but I thought that she was good looking lady. I said what’s up yadira. Are you doing something today? Cause I thought that might we can go to the movies or somewhere tonight. I was nervous but I knew that she will mine.

Carlos

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I think it is a good start but you could put alot more into it. Sounds like a good story though. Woot Woot.

Kelsee 4th

Anonymous said...

I want to hear more on this. Please be more specific! It's definitely an awesome start though.
GREAT JOB!

-Rachel

Anonymous said...

dude i really know what you mean. I get so nervous! It's crazy but good job man.

alex

Anonymous said...

Its is a really good start. I am looking forward to hearing the rest of your story.
Karissa