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Have you ever been locked up or put in to a situation wear you feel like there’s nothing you can do? Well I have and I you this story would be something worth reading. It was a normal day just like any other I was feeling good because I was going to meet up with my girl cousin and are friend Kim. Well I was in Ogden this day and it was about nine in the morning I woke up to go meet Kim and later we would go me my cousin. Well the day was going as planned until I got a call that I had to go to d.t for the weekend no big deal ive done it before. It was said that I would go in for the weekend. This is wear my story begins.

My first days in d.t. wear normal I sat and waited for a hearing I thought things wear going good until my hearing came and they said I would be leaving and going to o&a for forty-five days well that’s all good right? Wrong! I did my time and did well I had my problems but did what I was supposed to do as my court date came and went I found out that I would be going to a program for six months.

I then waited in d.t. for a while and then I finally got picked up now let me explain a few things while in d.t. I was good kept me nose clean and minded my own business. I did what was asked plus some extra work hear and there. Well ass I got in the car with this lady I said dang this freaking sucks six months crap that’s forever. As I kept to my-self answering questions when asked she told me if I knew how long I would be in the program I said yeah six months give or take me doing good. She said no youll be in there for about thirteen months. I said what as the wind was took from my lungs that’s insane they told me six. well they told you wrong. she told me well I was there for six months until I left because they said I wasn’t doing good enough so in total I was locked up so far for about nine months.

David