Monday, October 6, 2008

I Look at Your Picture

I look at your picture

Jesse


I looked at your picture
Over their on my wall
I took one look
And seen it fall

I went to pick it up
And look for you
But it wasn’t there
What was I to do?

Weeks went by
Your face began to fade away
Will I ever get to see your face?
I thought of that today

Remembering a face
So deep in my mind
Why was your picture?
So hard to find

Someone reminded me of you today
I looked at my wall
But your picture wasn’t their
It was gone far away

I guess I can’t always turn around
And expect you to be their
Or so I found

I just wish you where here
For just one more night
I just want someone
To hold me so tight

But now that you’re gone
And so far away
That won’t stop me
From thinking of you today

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

that was deep it was very profound. good job

Jonathan

Anonymous said...

dang dude you just made me cry lol no but seriously that was insane, very deep, and so true! one of the worst feelings in the world is when you start to forget the little details of someone that you love...

alex

Anonymous said...

Well that was deep and you put a lot of thought into your poem and thats good your thinking of your gurls that is a good thing i think its good so ya i feel crazy about your poem...it makes me think i write poems to but thanx JESSE

Anonymous said...

Your passage is raw with meaning it definetly makes me search through my mind...

Anonymous said...

you did a really good job i like it. it was deep and you just do a good job at writing.



ashley

Anonymous said...

thats a nice poem. i like it.

Tayler