Friday, February 6, 2009

Backpacks

Backpacks should not be allowed n school for multiple reasons. The first reason is because carrying a backpack can cause injury, the second reason is because kids can bring illegal items, and the third reason is because it messes up the classroom. In this essay I will prove my point.

Back packs should not be allowed in school because carrying around a backpack can injure your back. My little brother is in 7th grade and his backpack is like a ton of bricks. He is always having backaches. C.F Medical weekly says that is raising the cases of scoliosis in youth. My not allowing back packs in the school kids will have better packs.

Today the crime in youth is raising, backpacks are starting to be a front for this. A lot of kids use their backpacks to bring drugs to school and sell or use them. When I went to my old school I used my backpack to conceal my tazer at school. This is another reason backpacks should not be allowed in our school.

When I walk in the classroom and sit in my desk and start to do my work I get distracted easy, especially by clutter. When I look around and see a lot of backpacks, I, along with others, get distracted from our work. All the backpacks make the room look like a mess. That’s the final reason backpacks shouldn’t be allowed.

In conclusion backpacks should not be allowed in our schools. Due to kids having bad back problems, carrying of illegal items and it causes distracted clutter.

Grant

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

i'm agree with you backpacks are dangerous for all of us because some kids can carry bad stuff

Anonymous said...

i think you made a lot of good points, maybe thats how i got scoliosis.



shalee l.